We recieved mixed reviews when we pitched our idea to the class for our film trailer (The Recluse), the class comented that originally we had not made the story too clear however we did remind the class that it is a teaser trailer and all though we want to reveal certain aspects of the film to the audience we do not want to spoil the film for the viewers, however we did improve on of the slides to give a clearer idea for where the story is going. Another area the class aid we needed to improve was the killer appearence slide as at this point we had not came to a definite decision on what he was going to look like.
We were told that although our pitch did not contain all the information that would improve the pitch, as a group we delivered it in a powerful and convincing way and that if we added the information we delivered through speech it would increase the effictiveness of the power point.
After looking at the feedback we made a number of changes to our pitch such as improving the slide mentioned earlier and going into more detail about the visual style we wish to achieve and the target audience we wish to engage.
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