Edit to our main production

After listening to feedback from our class and comments left after posting our first cut on youtube it was clear that there were still some areas that needed to change in order to further develop a more sophisticated final product. one area that we all felt definitely needed to change as it mad our production appear cheap and quite cheesy was the title that appeared at the end of the trailer. It was bright red and was animated to appear as though something had clawed at the title and blood dripped through it afterwards, the clawing had no relevance to our killer as he uses a pistol to kill his victims and bright red just looked childish so we completely revised the end title. After a bit of brainstorming with the group we managed to produce a new title that gave a much more mature feel to the whole product, our new title had a black and greyish background with a kind of sepia effect and the the title "The Recluse" appeared in black and lit up into a white in flash like approach and then returned to a backlit black, the change made the trailer appear much more professional.